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i am made of fairy-tales and sunshine and lightning and
sometimes the sticky residue that stains your fingertips
after eating a peanut butter and jelly sandwich.

i am the sky and the rain and the grass growing green
between your toes in summertime, dewy with the dawn
of a new day and a new moon every month.

i am a smile and a laugh and a look and if you're lucky
i am also eye contact and finger contact and lip contact,
static electricity and magnetic compulsion but

you
        cannot
                              touch me
Whitney:

spot the reference!

Kelsey:

this is for both of us!
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Runningfromlions-xx Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Almost two years later and this is still my favorite poem~
Thought I'd drop in and let you know.
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Runningfromlions-xx Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is gorgeous and makes me feel powerful.
And I have absolutely no clue why it makes me feel powerful but I love it all the same <3

Thanks for writing it, made my day n____n
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sibilantesses Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2009
Hee, thank you! I like the idea that it makes you feel powerful because it is a cheer-me-up kind of poem. I'm so glad you love it. :3
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Runningfromlions-xx Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No problem, it was my pleasure :3
I think it's the last line that really induced the feelings of power <3
With the rest leading up to it and yadda yadda, anyways.
Beautiful :]
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sibilantesses Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2009
:heart:
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cookymonstah Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2009
:heart:
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MyWhimsicalAlter Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
absolutely beautiful work. :) i can't even find room for some constructive criticism, it's that good.
:+favlove:
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sibilantesses Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2009
Aww! That's the nicest thing I've heard in forever! Thank you so much, you don't know what it means to hear that. :heart:
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MyWhimsicalAlter Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
:hug:
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gliitchlord Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2009   Writer
Wonderfully written.

:+favlove:
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