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She's Got Technicolor Shoes

by ~sibilantesses

She's got technicolor shoes
Untied, laces trailing
But that's okay, I'm with the band, baby
I'll follow you anyway.

Excuse me
I don't believe we've met before
But it doesn't matter
Just let your belt buckle do the talking
We'll be together in no time.

My finger's on her lips
We were laughing
Slip off that pretty thing, sweetheart
We can play dress-up later.

What can I say?
You and me both
It's gonna be beautiful, isn't it?
Leave your shoes on.
:iconsibilantesses:
Mar. 18, 2006.

This was for a girl I liked. Personally, I feel like this has always been one of my better pieces. The girl, two years later, agrees.
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:iconjsting:
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love the sassy, brassy sultry voice to this piece.
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:iconsibilantesses:
Thank you so much. :]
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:iconsporkingitup:
Hey, that's ME!

I still love this poem to death.
Aww. Brings back memories of me when I was innocent. Well, more innocent.

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I'll love you forever; I'll like you for always; As long as you're living, my baby you'll be.

Whitticisms
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:iconveo33:
This is so so so good. <3

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think about your troubles.
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:iconsibilantesses:
Thank you. It means the world to hear that. :3
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:iconveo33:
:3 Don't mind me peeping through your gallery, I'm really liking your poetry!! <3

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think about your troubles.
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:iconwolverinepriestess:
I actually really like this one; it caught my eye.

I like the style of this, the way that it's in first person and you get a feeling of what the narrator is feeling as they speak.

I can also imagine this as a song :iconomfgplz:

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Oh, did I hurt your feelings?
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:iconsibilantesses:
Funny you should mention imagining it as a song... [link]

It's in chapter 16, if you are so inclined.
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